Improvements

1st and 2nd attempt.

I like the Paramore pictures and the backgrounds on the text which makes it stand out and it starts to look more like a front cover music magazine. It makes it look more professional, also the colour that is used to make the text stands out, means that it will draw the attention of the audience, intriguing them to look into the magazine and contemplate on whether they should buy the magazine or not.

                                                                3rd attempt

Feedback Jan

My Contents Page Draft For a Music Magazine.

This is my magazine for my contents page. The page consists of bands and artists, but it lacks the additional information. A contents page shows page numbers, little bits of information, and they also have things like band interviews, concerts and tours. On my contents page this does not display anywhere on the page to look to obtain the page number of where to go, to read about this and find out the information they need if they would like to go to the concerts.

This is the second draft of this contents page.

Contents Page Layouts