Aaron: WWW: - The masthead on the front cover is eye catching, this means that it will make people stop to have a look at it. - The main image is personal so this means that it will be a personal problem that the reader may have themselves.
EBI: - The main image might make more sense if the picture was a picture that matched what the magazine may be talking about. - The plug/puff would should look more eye catching so that the people will want to check what it has to offer.
Marcus: WWW: - Small amounts of information that gets the reader interested. - The main image clearly represents the school and the smiling faces have the connotation of the school is a happy place.
EBI: - Include more features such as a bar code and a puff. - Possibly add a background image/colour to add texture.
WWW- The Images relates to Plantsbrook School, WWW- Masthead stands out. EBI- Make the Masthead relate to Plantsbrook ( use Plantsbrook colours) EBI- should have some sub articles to make it look more interesting EBI- You have written Standard twice and it doesn't make sense
Aaron:
ReplyDeleteWWW:
- The masthead on the front cover is eye catching, this means that it will make people stop to have a look at it.
- The main image is personal so this means that it will be a personal problem that the reader may have themselves.
EBI:
- The main image might make more sense if the picture was a picture that matched what the magazine may be talking about.
- The plug/puff would should look more eye catching so that the people will want to check what it has to offer.
Marcus:
ReplyDeleteWWW:
- Small amounts of information that gets the reader interested.
- The main image clearly represents the school and the smiling faces have the connotation of the school is a happy place.
EBI:
- Include more features such as a bar code and a puff.
- Possibly add a background image/colour to add texture.
WWW- The Images relates to Plantsbrook School,
ReplyDeleteWWW- Masthead stands out.
EBI- Make the Masthead relate to Plantsbrook ( use Plantsbrook colours)
EBI- should have some sub articles to make it look more interesting
EBI- You have written Standard twice and it doesn't make sense
I know about the standard thing i have fixed it.
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